ext_23735 ([identity profile] soda-and-capes.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] ariafic 2009-01-22 05:57 pm (UTC)

SECOND PERSON. I fucking adore second person.

here is what your eyebrows can do, your mouth, your chin, your eyes.
Wow, this is like a love letter to Ten. I needed this.

I love that although you are writing a Doctor/Martha fic, you deal with Rose. *thumbs-up*

once, in another skin, you loved her without fear.
THAT. WHAT IS WHY NINE/ROSE BUT NOT TEN/ROSE. YES.

The older you are, the more human.
This is the truest of truths.

some delight of your lips and tongue that makes you talk so rapidly you might one day collapse into breathlessness
OHGOD I LOVE HIM SO MUCH. This fic is . . . well, it's all the things about Ten that aren't messed up. (Well, and some of the other, but still.)

Lie because you like it.
♥________♥

She reminds you of
HA! Excellent.

in this form you love too easily and too well, and it frightens you.
YES. YES YES THAT.

think Yes, me too
Pervy human-fancier.

but with her single fragile beating heart
I LIKE HUMAN PEOPLE.

lose yourself and let Martha Jones be the doctor instead.
YEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS.

precisely between the hearts Martha Jones has coaxed and bullied back to life.
I just really like what you do with words.

Lie, but only by omission.
Pft, fucker is good at that kind.

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