It’s like a first kiss; their fingers tangle and their palms bump awkwardly and they can’t quite get the angle right, but after a moment Rodney’s hanging onto Sheppard hard enough that it really hurts, and John’s hanging on probably just as hard.
I love that, it's a gorgeous simile. And this whole fic is wonderful; your John voice is excellent.
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I love that, it's a gorgeous simile. And this whole fic is wonderful; your John voice is excellent.