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saintvic ([personal profile] saintvic) wrote in [personal profile] ariafic 2009-08-03 09:41 pm (UTC)

Thought this worked wonderfully. The style, the atmosphere and the way you capture Sam's thoughts and feelings all flow together and produce an absorbing picture. I especially liked: "The clothes left for him are identical to all his clothes in 2006. Sensible suit, professional. He feels shorter -- flat shoes, of course -- jacket too wide at the shoulders, tie strangely restricting. The clothes fit all wrong. Sam's skin fits all wrong.".

Thank you

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