First comment? Y/Y?

Okay you bitch you made me cry. I don't know how you did it but that last section was so touching I frakking cried I hate you.

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...iloveyou...

Still not shipping them but there is something kind of epic about them and you really captured it and gave it closure.

You had some really beautiful phrases in this... I especially liked "not like -- like something where every last simile fails."